If dogs had thumbs…..
Hello There! It appears that I will be the first one posting on the new site. I’m Liz and i hope to have a bio set up soon but for now you’ll just have to imagine what i’m like. Until i get creatively juiced i’ll be sharing some of my older writings. I will appreciate any feed back anyone has to offer. So for my first entry here’s my poem entitled Bitter Thoughts
Bitter Thoughts
The darkness is a place
I often like to hide
It’s where i put my sadness
And what i feel inside.
The darkness is my friends because
It covers up my eyes
Just in case one sees
Through the bitter lies.
But the dark is cold and lonely
If you choose to stay too long
I thought it wouldn’t happen
But it turns out i was wrong.
The darkness is deathly silent
And strong and hard as steel
But still i do not show
What it is i feel.
A single tear runs downs my cheek
For i start to miss my sight
But the only way to get it back
Is to step into the light.
And so i leave the darkness
For it turns out in the end
That i will never miss it cause
It makes a wicked friend.
By Liz
I promise i’ll write something lighter next time!













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That’s a good start though – a poem about metamorphosis.
By Ryan on 02.01.02 2:53 pm
Why don’t you post again?
By Ryan on 02.08.02 12:49 pm
You ROCK Liz, I like rhymes and the dark!
By Melani on 02.08.02 11:14 pm
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